Good, but I recommend to change light on her face. Generally nose, especially tip and center line illuminated the most while around eyes usually darker. In addition on your picture left side of her face (and nose) would be lightened by blue flame and right side in the shadow. I like metal and stones. Not my favorite hairstyle but hair look good. Albeit less blue and more white light would look more natural, I guess.
Ah yeah you're right. Added the flame in last cuz she looked weird in that pose without really doing anything. So i wasn't really thinking about the lighting. Thank you, I'll keep that in mind for the future. However i won't be changing this because it was just a doodle.